Commander application - Otex/Pengu Island

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IGN: N/A (Will be Otex unless given a lore position) 
 
Age: 19 
 
SteamID: STEAM_0:1:50573422 
 
Rank: N/A 
 
Discord is required, can you get it?: 
Yes 
Questionare! 
 
What makes you a good leader?: I am an experienced leader both in and out of game. I have lead battalions in MCJROTC and have gained my leadership attributes from the class. I'm responsible and mature, I'm always about makings sure I have a sharp figure and make sure not to taint it by doing something I'm not to. 
 
What’s your definition of leadership: An attribute that gives someone the confidence to take a large or small group of people and guide them through an obstacle or challenge or acts as an idol to bring out the best in someone else. 
 
If you have any commander experience, list below (Server name, rank, time held): 
Prominet Gaming, SGM Shadow Heavy Leader, 1 and ½ months now currently becoming 3ic of shadow Nightfall Networks, Commander Cody, 1 month  
As a commander, how can you improve the community: I can improve not only my regiment, but others if help is needed. I love to train recruits and help them try to become a CO one day. I can teach others how to lead and bring out the best in them. I'm known for having a wild imagination so Event planning would be something I'm great at, helping build a server story that everyone can follow and have fun with.  
 
Do you know the rules: Yes  Keep failrp to a minimum, no RDM, respect staff and your fellow players at all times, do not spam the chat box, and follow the clone laws  
How's your maturity level?: I'm mature when I need to be, but goofy during down time or ooc time 
 
What way do you turn on an About face?: 
Over right shoulder 180 degrees  
Why should we pick you over other Commanders applying?: I not only look to get a commander spot, I want to show others that anyone can become a commander and one day with enough time and practice they can be in our boots. I want the server to be something that everyone can look forward to getting on. I'd make my regiment well respected and want people to look at and hear about as being well skilled, but easy to get along with. I don’t just want to be someone's CO, but a friend to my troops and others in the server.

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The application doesn't give any context to what your going to do in this position, you stated your going to help people achieve high ranking positions is that the only thing you can bring to the table? You don't give any information on how your going to do it.

"For As a commander, how can you improve the community?" You give reasons that an NCO would do and you reuse the phrase teach leadership quite a bit, then you go onto say you have a wild imagination for event planning if that's true why are you trying to become a commander not a Gamemaster.

Lastly, the application as poor grammar and you're already established on another community which will take away from a battalion which needs someone that can be there actively.

Overall your application didn't tell me much about you or the plans you were going to state with your battalion I agree with Feds. Overall you did decent though I really can't throw my two cents in to say that it was good.


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Decent app, not gonna shit on you because of poor grammar or the fact that you put a "lack of effort" because of what the previous posters said about it. You did your best and no one can discredit you for that.
ACCEPTED

Your application has been accepted, Direct Message Trixx on Discord with a time when you are available to do an interview!

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